Monday, July 09, 2007

castle wall

We went to Skipton last Friday and for the most part the rain kept off while we were there, but it was very cold. I took quite a few photographs and will no doubt post some of them here or elsewhere at some stage.

For now, just this with a one-line haiku to fit in with the "feathered friends" prompt at One Deep Breath


narrowboat passes under the castle wall ducks loiter

19 comments:

  1. This is so concise, brief and yet says it all! Very nice.

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  2. those ducks are fascinating, will they all jump in the water together?

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  3. That haiku reminds me of similar moments in my past. Thanks for the travel.

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  4. I like the way the structure of the line matches the structure and position of the ducks.

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  5. Great visual and the sense of the boat passing behind our backs.

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  6. I like the loitering ducks. I feel like they should be chatting and drinking coffee like the guys waiting for construction work to start...

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  7. Beautiful photo and the haiku describes it so well. I can almost see being in a boat passing by.

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  8. Oh, ho! I left a comment on the hagia you posted at Summer Haiku blogspot saying I'd comment on it here. You fooled me. :-)

    This is a different but also really nice haiga. Works very nicely in the oneline form ... reminds me of that expression about getting one's "ducks all in a row."

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  9. Loitering ducks creates a mysterious feeling! Your haiku and photo are really, really nice.
    :)

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  10. One line is enough to tell the story!

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  11. Duck do loiter don't they? There is something so hopeful about them, like the next person coming round the corner is the one with the bread.
    Thanks

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  12. The lines of words, birds and water work so well together. The ducks look like they will jump at the start gun for a relay!

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  13. I like the way the words are lined up like the loitering ducks! Lovely photo.

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  14. Big smile for this. Thought of us watching them watching us!

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  15. Ducks are so adorable... 100 degrees and broiling here--I have been making sure the birds get lots of food and water... They visit in great numbers when it is so unbearable.

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  16. Love the refreshing ook of this photo, and the ducks all standing there very pleasant.

    I fixed up a makeshift fountain for the birds here--days and days of sweltering heat, poor things. I've never seen birds just lying around panting before!

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  17. Skipton....we passed through here a couple of weeks ago....avoiding the black clouds of York...needless to say the black clouds caught us up! LOL! Fun, on a motorbike!

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  18. Positioning of your poem in the photo is great. I'm envisioning the loitering ducks wavings their webbed feet at the riders on the passing boats.

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