Monday, November 26, 2007

on the cobblestones


riverside path
on the cobblestones
a white feather


words & photo © gerald england 2007

posted in response to the "boulders/rocks/stones/pebbles" theme at One Deep Breath.

An earlier version of the haiku and a glimpse of the path can be seen on Poetry Scotland

14 comments:

  1. What a lovely thought and photo! Thanks for these.

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  2. I like the photo, the patterns of cobblestone, and how they feel while walking. I admire this piece; it feels very meditative and the feather accent is perfect.

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  3. how cool is this? The interruption of pattern, the undeniable changing sights...

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  4. I love your cobblestoned response!
    I have a few cobblestones in my garden that were found under layers of pavement in NYC!
    I love their history and the fact that they are hand-hewn!

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  5. How exactly you capture the feel of the unexpected surprise on the path. So well done. Thank you.

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  6. the element of surprise & the contrast (stone & feather) make for a hauntingly beautiful haiku

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  7. just beautiful, anything that reminds me of the 'old country! I am an expat.

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  8. wonderful! Hope you are enjoying the season.

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  9. I love the visual and poetic contrast of feathers and cobblestones.

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  10. I like the simplicity of the description.

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